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Favorite Scene from the Drawer

This week, we’re sharing favorite scenes. I decided to search through archives of past writing for this. Partly because I’m so deep in the world of NEVER SKY that I wanted a wee break, and partly because I remembered writing this short snippet years ago, and really liking it. This comes from a fantasy manuscript I was working on before NEVER SKY. It’s pretty dark. I guess I like dark. (Maybe some of you know that by now?) Anyway, it’s a prologue, which most people will tell you is a no-no but I had fun with it. Hope it doesn’t creep you out too much :)
The Cart

Prologue

Sky and earth tilted to the left, a blur of blue and white, as a shrill whinny broke into the air. Padrig Forester had only time to grasp the pommel as his horse lurched further to the side. The mare’s hooves begged for purchase in great dragging scrapes. He held on, rocking and sinking, until at last she found a foothold and righted with a jolt. Padrig made a low sound to soothe her, a sound made strange by his trembling voice. 

He searched the ground below. White gashes floated inches above the mountain trail, scored by the mare’s shoes. Black ice again, invisible and deadly. Padrig patted her sweat-matted neck. 

“Steady as you go, Ginny,” he murmured. “This will be done with soon.” 

The mare startled under his touch, tossing her head in defiance. She was a good horse, had served him well for near a dozen years, but Padrig knew their bond had been broken that morning. She had smelled the blood early and when it came time to tie the cart’s shafts to her harness she had fought, rearing and bucking like he’d never seen. She had even bitten his shoulder, stamped his skin with a purple imprint of horse teeth that still throbbed. But Padrig couldn’t blame her. Animals had a powerful aversion to death.

Padrig turned around. The cart still crunched along over the snow-patched trail behind him. Dark circles stained the woolen blanket he’d draped over the top. The putrid stench overtook him, nausea striking next, raking claws through his stomach, flooding his mouth with warm saliva. Padrig bit down and pressed a prayer through his lips, pleading to Gepsa for forgiveness. When the sickness finally ebbed away, he vowed not to look at the cart again. Not until he had to give it to the boy.

He lifted his gaze to the crest of Mount Aroe. There, within the icy dome, lay the Cobai city where the boy was said to be. It would be immense work to reach that place—the coming trail would only offer steeper grades and more snow—but that was why he had been chosen to deliver the cart. His reputation as an expert tracker had brought him good coin in the past. This time it was he who’d pay if he failed—with his life.

“Take heart, Ginny.” The mare’s long brown ears flicked back. “At least we’ll learn if the blood of the Lion still lives.”

Padrig found solace in his own words. Since autumn, the question had been in every mind. If the boy truly was Erick of Belfort’s son, then Tarthians could have some hope. If he was the Lion’s son, Padrig would pledge his fealty—his life’s service—in a single breath. 

But how would the boy react? Would he condemn Padrig for what he was doing? Padrig had no choice but to deliver this vile load—would the boy have the wisdom to understand? Padrig leaned aside and spat at the frozen earth. No one should have to do what he was doing.

No one.

Bad as he felt, Padrig knew the boy, Willem Hawk, would feel far worse when he saw what was in the cart.

The Truth About Finding the Balance

Warning: Written while sleep-deprived and revision-impaired. Do not operate heavy machinery while reading this post.

It’s tough to talk about struggling to find balance after Talia’s post yesterday. I would say Talia and I are on opposite ends of the spectrum. For the past year, I’ve had the privilege of writing full-time. Before I go any further, I want to reiterate that it is a privilege. I’m very fortunate. It might not always be this way, and I don’t for a moment take it for granted. Just over a year ago, I dreamt of being in this position. Dreamt about it. How many people can truly say they are living a dream?

When I say I write, “full time,” I mean it in a literal sense. For me, 2011 has been a sprint to complete Book One, and draft and revise Book Two. It’s been a year of blogging, struggling to blog, tweeting, learning to market, trying to stay organized, trying to process what’s happening, website… website… how hard is it to get a website together? Well, when you’re doing a gazillion other things, and you hit a patch of bad luck, it’s hard.

My days are spent in front of the computer, and much of the time, I feel the world blowing around me. Like Donna said, as a writer, I exist in my imagination. If any of you have read UNDER THE NEVER SKY, I exist in a Realm — the Realm of my story world. My kids are growing up in fast-forward. My friends say I have disappeared. My husband… he’s around here somewhere, isn’t he? And groceries? A home-cooked meal? Luxuries. There is no time, and there is far too much to do.

And yet, the writing Realm is a beautiful place to exist, so many hours of the day. You writers out there know how it feels to write a great description. Find that exact shade of emotion–that subtle nuance that makes a scene, or a moment pop. We create worlds when we write. We mold them and mull over them and mold again, and then stand back and say, yes. That is what I believe. That is what is true.


I struggle every day to look up from the screen. I struggle to find time for the writing things, and the family things, and everything else. But I accept that there is no perfect in real life. And I remind myself to enjoy the teetering, tottering balancing act. It’s the road, not the destination. The act of balancing, not balance itself. That is what I believe is true.